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# Your First Days as a Manager
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Your first days as a Manager
To succeed as a manager, you need clarity on your destination [and a team that trusts it’s worth pursuing]. [Note: Slight reordering for a smoother parallel structure.] Your first days are critical for absorbing context and building rapport—it’s an opportunity to make the most of first impressions and enjoy the most free time you'll have before taking on more responsibilities.
To succeed as a manager, you need clarity about your destination and a team that trusts it's worth pursuing. Your first days are crucial for absorbing context and building rapport—they're a chance to leverage first impressions and utilize the freest time you'll have before more responsibilities pile up.
For your initial weeks, focus on two goals: **understanding context** and **establishing trust**.
In your initial weeks, focus on two main goals: **understanding context** and **establishing trust**.
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### Getting Context
Getting Context
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#### Your Company and the Industry
Your Company and the Industry
Start by grasping how your company operates within its industry and how it stacks up against competitors. The key is understanding how the business *actually* makes money—outsiders often guess incorrectly.
Start by grasping how your company operates within its industry and how it stacks up against competitors. One key is to identify how the business *actually* makes money—because outsiders often guess incorrectly.
For example, while mobile games might seem to profit from ads or microtransactions, the reality is that a tiny fraction of players ("whales") drive most of the revenue. Without attracting and retaining these high spenders, even popular games can fail. When you join the company, your hypothesis that its objective was “making games that attract players” shifts to “making games that attract whales.” [Note: This change underscores the evolution in understanding.]
For example, while mobile games might seem mainly profitable due to ads or microtransactions, the reality is that a tiny fraction of players (“whales”) actually drive most of the revenue. Without attracting and retaining these high spenders, even popular games can struggle or fail. Upon joining the company, you might initially hypothesize its objective is simply "making games that attract players," but you'll likely discover it's truly about "making games that attract whales."
This dynamic reflects the competitive nature of the enterprise mobile industry: indie studios might survive on modest earnings, but larger companies with high payrolls and overhead costs often cannot. [Note: Minor wording adjustments for clarity and flow.]
This dynamic is influenced by the highly competitive enterprise mobile industry. Indie studios might survive on modest earnings, but larger companies with higher payrolls and bigger overhead costs typically cannot.
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Additionally, determine whether your company is a market leader or challenger. Leaders risk damage to their reputation with severe bugs or outages, while challengers typically prioritize speed and adaptability over polished perfection.
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