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This tapestry holds whispers,This tapestry holds a secret.
Secrets and blueprintsPalimpsests and blueprints
To all of creation.While a universe unfolds.
Globes of dying lightAn axis of dying light
That crash in the dark.That spins in the black.
But alas I can seeBut alas I can see
Its stars are not cross'dIts stars are locked.
For me [cue tears],For me, Dihya,
I fear my script is lost.I fear my script is lost.
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