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Later that night… Later that night…
It was past midnight and, as usual, the two anime HDD recorders were in the midst of their recording, emitting their low piercing sounds, the excess of their heat was on par with the fervent, heated strikes of the keyboard noises resounding in the middle of the room. It was past midnight and, as usual, the two anime HDD recorders were in the midst of their recording, emitting their low piercing sounds, the excess of their heat was on par with the fervent, heated strikes of the keyboard noises resounding in the middle of the room.
Title.. Title..
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Product Concept.. Product Concept..
A Story of a Chance Encounter, of Feelings and Couples Love A Story of a Chance Encounter, of Feelings and Couples Love
“I wonder if that last bit, 『Couples Love』 makes for a bad balance?” “I wonder if that last bit, [Couple’s Love] makes for a bad balance?”
It would have to be the effects of this morning’s 『Fated』 Encounter. It would have to be the effects of this morning’s [Fated] Encounter.
It would have to be that reality defying narrative firing up my creative will. It would have to be that reality defying narrative firing up my creative will.
It would have to be the passion overflowing out of my entire body that is sparking this unnecessary text. It would have to be the passion overflowing out of my entire body that is sparking this unnecessary text.
“No, if it’s not about selling such depictions of couples love, for what other reason would there be for dating sims?” “No, if it’s not about selling such depictions of couples love, for what other reason would there be for dating sims?”
After all, I somehow managed to save that hat after it rolled about ten-ish metres down the side of the street. After all, I somehow managed to save that hat after it rolled about ten-ish metres down the side of the street.
The girl had ran halfway down the hill, thanking me profusely, bowing her head multiple times, only stopping when I cut her off by saying 『That’s enough already』. The girl had ran halfway down the hill, thanking me profusely, bowing her head multiple times, only stopping when I cut her off by saying [That’s enough already].
I felt a bit of pride from the pain I suffered when I skinned my elbows. I felt a bit of pride from the pain I suffered when I skinned my elbows.
Prologue.. Prologue..
On that spring day, I, had a fated encounter…… On that spring day, I, had a fated encounter……
On a tall hill where the warm wind carries through the air, dancing cherry petals, and where the soft rays of the sun pours down onto the earth. On a tall hill where the warm wind carries through the air, dancing cherry petals, and where the soft rays of the sun pours down onto the earth.
There stood, on top of that hill, a lone girl. There stood, on top of that hill, a lone girl.
It was a girl whose name I did not know, a girl whom I had not met before. It was a girl whose name I did not know, a girl whom I had not met before.
There was stirring in my heart, a shining premonition, and in that moment…… There was stirring in my heart, a shining premonition, and in that moment……
I fell in love for the second time. I fell in love for the second time.
Yes, I had completely fallen in love again. Yes, I had completely fallen in love again.
I could not stop myself from falling in love. I could not stop myself from falling in love.
Even if I hurt myself. Even if I hurt her. Even if I hurt myself. Even if I hurt her.
Even if the feelings of two people would never come to be…… Even if the feelings of two people would never come to be……
And so, begins with the new semester, a premonition of things to come. And so, begins with the new semester, a premonition of things to come.
“…This is a little bit too painful isn’t it?” “…This is a little bit too painful isn’t it?”
Afterwards, the two of us briefly walked alongside each other down to the middle of the hill were my bicycle stood. Afterwards, the two of us briefly walked alongside each other down to the middle of the hill were my bicycle stood.
However after that, I rode down the hill on my bicycle, while she headed off back up the hill. However after that, I rode down the hill on my bicycle, while she headed off back up the hill.
During that period, we barely spoke at all. During that period, we barely spoke at all.
Neither of us gave our names, nor did we make any promise of sorts. Neither of us gave our names, nor did we make any promise of sorts.
“No, it’d be better if it hurt as much as getting your finger caught in a vice. In fact it’d be a brilliant misunderstanding!” “No, it’d be better if it hurt as much as getting your finger caught in a vice. In fact it’d be a brilliant misunderstanding!”
But that’s fine. But that’s fine.
No, that’s actually good. No, that’s actually good.
At any rate, my optimism is due to those kinds of stories; the ones filled with drama about being separated from your love only to be reunited once again by fickle fate. At any rate, my optimism is due to those kinds of stories; the ones filled with drama about being separated from your love only to be reunited once again by fickle fate.
After all, fate works in strange ways; she might even be a transfer student entering my class. After all, fate works in strange ways; she might even be a transfer student entering my class.
It could be that our fathers are mutual enemies and our relationship would be caught up in waves of love and hate. It could be that our fathers are mutual enemies and our relationship would be caught up in waves of love and hate.
We could be half brother and sister with the same mother, and the confirmation of such a shocking revelation would lead us to some swamp and… We could be half brother and sister with the same mother, and the confirmation of such a shocking revelation would lead us to some swamp and…
……setting aside from those few seconds where I’d somehow managed to completely lose myself in the dimension of Couples Love, it’s just well, that kind of thing yeah. ……setting aside from those few seconds where I’d somehow managed to completely lose myself in the dimension of Couples Love, it’s just well, that kind of thing yeah.
The Appeal Points of this Work.. The Appeal Points of this Work..
A work that is very innocent, tantalising and will leave you writhing shamefully in agony A work that is very innocent, tantalising and will leave you writhing shamefully in agony
An adventure novel of pure love, weaving a story of those youthful, spirited days. An adventure novel of pure love, weaving a story of those youthful, spirited days.
“……I’ve gone past the point of painful stories this time, instead I’ve just gone straight into geezer talk!” “……I’ve gone past the point of painful stories this time, instead I’ve just gone straight into geezer talk!”
Even so, I’ve never had such a strange motivation before. Even so, I’ve never had such a strange motivation before.
It is as though my passion which had been sleeping up until now had all been suddenly discharged. It is as though my passion which had been sleeping up until now had all been suddenly discharged.
When was the last time my feelings had been stoked like this? When was the last time my feelings had been stoked like this?
Ahh, it’s probably that time when I was so absorbed by the work 『A Metronome in Love』, that I forgot to eat and sleep…… Ahh, it’s probably that time when I was so absorbed by the work [A Metronome in Love that] I forgot to eat and sleep……
“If I look at it this way, 『Youth and Spirit』 don’t seem to fit. Especially since it’s not going to be one of those comedy games.” “If I look at it this way, 『Youth and Spirit』 don’t seem to fit. Especially since it’s not going to be one of those comedy games.”
…It was only just a year ago wasn’t it? …It was only just a year ago wasn’t it?
The Appeal Points of this Work.. The Appeal Points of this Work..
A work that is very innocent, tantalising and will leave you writhing shamefully in agony, A work that is very innocent, tantalising and will leave you writhing shamefully in agony,
An adventure novel of pure love, weaving a story of those ordinary days. An adventure novel of pure love, weaving a story of those ordinary days.
PS. This is where I plan to review. PS. This is where I plan to review.
“Ordinary days…I wonder if ordinary is overlapping a bit.” “Ordinary days…I wonder if ordinary is overlapping a bit.”
And like that, my game planning continued late into the night until the point where even the HDD recorders had finished recording all their anime. And like that, my game planning continued late into the night until the point where even the HDD recorders had finished recording all their anime.
…And so next morning’s newspapers were delivered thirty minutes later than usual. …And so next morning’s newspapers were delivered thirty minutes later than usual.
It was now the first day of April. It was now the first day of April.
And also the second day of plot development. And also the second day of plot development.
Character Setting.. Character Setting..
Heroine A (Name to be decided) Heroine A (Name to be decided)
Main Heroine. A girl whom we meet in a fated encounter along a hillside road amongst the dancing cherry blossoms. Main Heroine. A girl whom we meet in a fated encounter along a hillside road amongst the dancing cherry blossoms.
“I should probably try to take greater advantage of the cherry blossom setting, after all I did go to great lengths to get that hat back.” “I should probably try to take greater advantage of the cherry blossom setting, after all I did go to great lengths to get that hat back.”
With my unwavering passion, I continued to tackle with the game plan and the creation of the main heroine. Meanwhile my thoughts drifted back to the reality of my encounter with that girl. With my unwavering passion, I continued to tackle with the game plan and the creation of the main heroine. Meanwhile my thoughts drifted back to the reality of my encounter with that girl.
It was along the same lines as my writings for the work’s character setting, she was a girl whose name I did not know, nor a girl whom I had met before. It was along the same lines as my writings for the work’s character setting, she was a girl whose name I did not know, nor a girl whom I had met before.
I’ve been living in this town ever since I was born, having never seen her before, I assume she was probably someone who had just moved in or perhaps someone who was just passing through town. I’ve been living in this town ever since I was born, having never seen her before, I assume she was probably someone who had just moved in or perhaps someone who was just passing through town.
A white one piece and a white beret hat. A white one piece and a white beret hat.
And that look on her face she had while she held down her swaying hair in the wind…. And that look on her face she had while she held down her swaying hair in the wind….
Truth be told, I don’t really remember her face. Truth be told, I don’t really remember her face.
The situation seemed really intense at the time so I didn’t get to the point of clearly seeing the specifics of her face. The situation seemed really intense at the time so I didn’t get to the point of clearly seeing the specifics of her face.
However I still remember the white… However I still remember the white…
Hmm no, that’s why colour has nothing to do with it. Hmm no, that’s why colour has nothing to do with it.
Well not colour specifically, but the white of the one piece. Well not colour specifically, but the white of the one piece.
Character Setting.. Character Setting..
Heroine A (Name to be decided) Heroine A (Name to be decided)
Main Heroine. A girl whom we meet in a fated encounter along hillside road amongst the dancing sakura. Main Heroine. A girl whom we meet in a fated encounter along hillside road amongst the dancing sakura.
At the top of the hill there bloomed only a single, large ancient cherry blossom tree. At the top of the hill there bloomed only a single, large ancient cherry blossom tree.
A curse hung upon that large tree, binding the heroine to live as a blossom spirit through the eternal passage of time. A curse hung upon that large tree, binding the heroine to live as a blossom spirit through the eternal passage of time.
The protagonist in his youth, made a promise with that girl……. The protagonist in his youth, made a promise with that girl…….
The protagonist keeping that promise, would fulfil her wish and in that moment break the curse. The protagonist keeping that promise, would fulfil her wish and in that moment break the curse.
However, this would wipe her existence from everyone’s memories. However, this would wipe her existence from everyone’s memories.
“Is it just me or did I somehow go back to the very start of Da. ○po?” “Is it just me or did I somehow go back to the very start of Da **po?” (TN: Da Capo is a musical annotation that indicates to the musician to repeat from the beginning of the piece.)
And just like that, I spent the entire day stumbling around in a maze of my own thoughts, the proposal not even inching forward one iota. And just like that, I spent the entire day stumbling around in a maze of my own thoughts, the proposal not even inching forward one iota.
I’ll have to make it up from tomorrow. I’ll have to make it up from tomorrow.
The second night of the new month. The second night of the new month.
It’s that time when it seems like you could almost hear the approach of the new semester. It’s that time when it seems like you could almost hear the approach of the new semester.
Story Summary Story Summary
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“Crap, all the sites are done with their April Fools Jokes. Looks like I’ve got no choice but to steadily hunt down all the spoilers.” “Crap, all the sites are done with their April Fools Jokes. Looks like I’ve got no choice but to steadily hunt down all the spoilers.”
I did two more lines today. I did two more lines today.
The 3rd of April. The 3rd of April.
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