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-Don't drop the pressure!
+Don't let the pressure drop!
-If we stop, it's all over!
+We stop, we die!
-Yes, sir.
+Yes, sir!
 Make the announcement.
-Yes, sir.
+Roger.
 We're passing through the abandoned station.
-Please brace for impact.
+All hands, brace for impact.
 Damn it!
-Get out of here!
 Stay back!
-What you need to survive....
+Stay the fuck back!
-It's not some tool that will keep you hidden and safe.
+To survive, what you need...
-It's power to fight the Kabane without fear.
+is not some tool that will \Nkeep you safely hidden away.
+It's the power to fight the Corpses without fear.
 Shingo!
-Are you okay?
+Are you okay!?
 Yeah.
-I owe you.
+I owe you one.
-Oh, my God.
+Your hand!
 Twenty years ago,
-fear of the Kabane drove the people of Hinomoto to take shelter in stations.
+the people of Hinomoto sought refuge from the Corpses behind the walls of stations.
-They abandoned their pride and fellow man
+Casting aside both friends and dignity alike,
-and fled.
+they fled for their lives.
 Use it.
 Use the suicide bag!
 Hurry up!
-Show us what you're made of!
+Show us your resolve!
 Don't be a disgrace!
-What are you doing?
+What are you doing!?
 Pull it already!
-Can we really be proud of our survival that's predicated on sacrificing our own?
+Can we truly be proud of a life built upon the sacrifices of others?
-Their lives aren't all we lose.
+We lose so much more than just their lives.
-That's why,
+That's why...
 I...
 Mother...
 Damn it!
-I want the power to defeat the Kabane.
+I want the power to slay Corpses.
 I'm so close!
 You're awake.
-The bushi held them off.
+The Knights held them off.
 You can go back to sleep.
 For now.
 Did another station get overrun?
-Hey, did you hear.
+Hey, did you hear?
 They said the supplies are late.
-I guess the front line fell back again.
+I heard the front line retreated again.
-How long is this place going to last?
+How long do you think this dump'll last?
-Hey, don't say that!
+Hey, cut it out!
-What if a bushi heard you?
+What if a Knight heard you?
 Hey there, hero!
-Running late?
+Bit late, eh?
-Watch your calculation.
+Your hair's still lookin' a mess.
+What? No way...
+Careful with your calculations.
 Plate 3 needs more adhesive.
 Hey,
 Ikoma!
-How did yesterday go?
+How'd it go yesterday?
 No good.
-It should have plenty of pressure, but...
+The pressure should've been enough, but...
-What's wrong with using normal lead shots again?
+Remind me what's wrong with using normal lead shots again?
-Because then it'd be the same as the bushi's steam guns.
+Because that'd be no different to the Knights' steam guns.
-It'll just get repelled by the Kabane's heart cage.
+They'll just bounce straight off the Corpse's heartcage.
 That's why we need jet bullets.
 We need more penetrating power.
-And you're going to use that to fight the Kabane instead of the bushi?
+And you're gonna use that to fight the Corpses in the Knights' stead?
-You're freaking insane.
+You must've hit your head on something.
 Did you up the explosives?
-Come on, because you just increased the cavity in the last tune-up?
+Come on, you just increased the cavity size in the last tune-up, remember?
 That's it, Takumi!
 Why did I skip a step?
 Where are you going?
-I'm going home to start over.
+I'm going home and redoing it.
-Hey,
+Hey, hey,
 at least finish your work here first.
-Hey, it's Ayame-sama.
+Hey, it's Lady Ayame.
 From the Yomokawa family?
-I like to check everything myself.
+I'd like to personally inspect it all.
-Ayame-sama.
+What a pleasant surprise, Lady Ayame.
-How can we help you?
+How could we possibly help you?
-It's my father's steam gun.
+This is my father's steam gun.
-It's having some problems, so I was hoping someone could take a look.
+There appears to be a problem with it, \Nso I was hoping someone might take a look.
-We would be happy to.
+Of course, we would be glad to.
-Ayame-sama.
+The good Lady Ayame.
-She is beautiful.
+At least she's easy on the eyes.
-She is the bushi princess.
+She's the princess of the Knights.
 Ikoma!
-Come here and help Ayame-sama.
+Come here and assist Lady Ayame!
-Here's your chance, hero.
+It's your calling, hero!
-Allow me to take that.
+Allow me.
-Do you want to become a hero?
+So, you wish to become a hero?
-I just don't like having to run away.
+I just hate running away.
-Ayame-sama,
+Lady Ayame,
 where will you be pointing this?
 The west gate is opening!
-The Kotetsujyo is coming!
+The Iron Fortress is coming!
-The Kotetsujyo should be coming tomorrow.
+Was the Iron Fortress not \Nscheduled to arrive tomorrow?
-Let's go.
+Let us go.
-The Kotetsujyo?
+The Iron Fortress?
-The Husoujyo is supposed to come tonight.
+But the Fusang Fortress is also coming tonight.
-Two Hayajiros in one day?
+Two railforts in one day?
 Father,
-wasn't the Kotetsujyo supposed to arrive tomorrow?
+was the Iron Fortress not supposed to arrive tomorrow?
-Hayatani Station has been lost.
+Hayatani Station has fallen.
-With less stops to make, it makes sense it would arrive earlier.
+With fewer stops to make, \Nan earlier arrival is only natural.
 But...
 Get the inspection box!
-I wonder if anyone's been bitten.
+You think some unlucky guy got bitten?
 That's what they're about to find out.
-They serach for bite marks to determine if they've been infected by a Kabane.
+They'll search for bite marks to see if anyone's been infected by a Corpse.
-If they find one, they throw them in jail.
+If they find one, they'll throw them in jail.
 It's what the authorities always do.
-Well, yeah, can you blame them?
+Yeah, well, can you blame them?
 They could be incubating the infection.
-All right, start the maintenance!
+All right, begin maintenance!
-Look.
+Hey, look.
-Just the carotid artery is thicker.
+It's just the cartoid artery that's thicker.
 So the virus really does pass through here.
 Hey!
-It's rare to find this good of a specimen.
+You don't come across \Nspecimens of this quality often.
-You're breaking the rules!
+That's taboo!
-We know that this isn't some curse.
+This isn't some curse.
-What?
+You and I both know that!
-Some kid of a bigwig?
+Who's that?
-What is it?
+Some kinda bigwig?
-Nothing.
+What's wrong?
+Uh, nothing.
 Hey, kid!
-The exit is the other way.
+The exit is over on the other side.
-Even children have to go through inspection.
+Children aren't exempt from the inspection!
 Only a fool would judge a book by its cover.
-It's what my brother always told me, Mr. Mustache.
+That's what my brother always told me, Mr. Mustache.
-What did you say?!
+Wh-What did you call me!?
 Leave it.
 She is my guest.
-My lord!
+M-Milord!
 Are you the boss here?
-I am Kensho, head of the Yomokawa family.
+I am Kenshou, head of the Yomokawa family.
 Lord Yomokawa, thank you for your hospitality.
-Shimon-sama, I presume.
+Priest Shimon, I presume.
 I have read your letter.
 We would like to take you to our mansion first.
 They're not going to be inspected?
-What is going on?
+What the hell's going on?
 Who are they?
-No idea.
+Dunno.
-It's a Kabane!
+It's a Corpse!
-He's been bitten!
+He has an injury!
 Don't let him get away!
-A Kabane?
+A Corpse?
 Stop right there!
-No! I'm not a Kabane!
+No! I'm not a Corpse!
 Stop!
 Kill him!
 Surround and kill him!
 I swear, I'm not one of them!
 Please help me!
-Stop!
+Stop it!
-Who the hell are you?!
+Who the hell are you, kid!?
-He's saying he's not a Kabane!
+He's saying he's not a Corpse!
-Like we can trust him!
+Like hell we can trust him!
 Stop, you coward!
-Those suspected of being a Kabane
+Those suspected of being a Corpse
 are to be locked up for three days and kept under watch.
-You're the ones who made the rule!
+You're the ones who made that rule!
-Shut up!
+Shut your damn mouth!
-This matter doesn't concern a lowly steam smith!
+This matter doesn't concern a lowly steam-smith!
 I'm trying to tell you that you're pointing your guns at the wrong targets!
-Father.
+Father, please!
-Kabane hearts!
+Corpse hearts!
 Disgusting!
 Why does he have them?
 Answer me!
-Why do you have something like that?!
+Why do you have something like that!?
 He's getting away!
-Don't!
+Stop!
 He died...
 Which means...
-He wasn't a Kabane?
+He wasn't a Corpse?
-Aren't you embarrassed to be so afraid of everything?
+Aren't you ashamed to be scared of every damn thing?
-For losing your sanity.
+You're madmen!
-Those are some lofty words.
+How lofty your words are.
-A privilege afforded to you because of the guaranteed safety the bushi provide.
+A privilege you enjoy only because the very earth you step on is under the Knights' tireless guard.
-No!
+You're wrong!
-I will fight too!
+I'll fight too!
 Kurusu!
 Yes, sir.
-I'm close to finishing the steam gun!
+I'm close to finishing my Piercing Ca—
 Throw him in jail.
-Hey may be a Kabane.
+He may be a Corpse.
 Father!
-Let's go.
+Let us go.
 Ayame,
-defending order is also a bushi's duty.
+maintaining order, too, is a Knight's duty.
-Order...?
+Order?
 I see.
-You're both headed to Kongokaku?
+You're both headed to Kongoukaku?
-And the Lord Shogun?
+With the Lord Shogun?
 No, not at this time.
 That is why the two of us are going alone.
-It's June.
+June, huh?
-Almost time, brother.
+It's almost time, Brother.
 I knew it!
-It's the corpse gatherer.
+You're the body gatherer!
 You're...
-Mumei.
+No-name.
-Mumei?
+No-name?
-Is that your name?
+Is that really your name?
-Nice, isn't it?
+Isn't it nice?
 My brother gave it to me.
-Hey, did you know that the guy from before wasn't a Kabane?
+Hey, did you know that the guy from before wasn't a Corpse?
-No, but I couldn't just ignore it.
+No, but I couldn't just ignore what was happening.
-Normally, you would.
+Any normal person would, though.
 Then there's something wrong with being normal.
-You're interesting.
+You're an interesting one!
 What do you mean?
-I mean, it's normal to be scared of the Kabane, right?
+I mean, it's normal to be scared of Corpses, right?
-People are generally frightened cowards. There's nothing they can do about that.
+People are just frightened cowards in general.
+They can't help it.
 Yes, they can.
-They have no choice but kill others out of fear?
+We have no choice but kill others out of fear?
-That's unthinkable to me.
+I can't accept that.
-You cannot lose your humanity to fear.
+We cannot lose our humanity to fear.
-Ikoma's a freaking dumbass, getting all worked up like that.
+Ikoma's a freaking dumbass, \Ngetting all worked up like that.
 What a self-righteous idiot.
-But...
+But you know...
-it's something I couldn't do even if I tried.
+I couldn't do something like that if I tried.
-Talking back to a bushi like that.
+Talking back to a Knight like that.
-That's what makes him stupid!
+That's exactly why he's an idiot!
-It's here! It's the Husoujyo.
+The Fusang Fortress is here!
-It's right on time this time.
+It's right on schedule this time.
 It's going too fast!
 Slow down!
 Damn it! Raise the bridge!
 Hurry up!
-It's too late.
+It won't make it in time!
-What happened?!
+What's happening!?
-It's the Kabane!
+It's the Corpses!
 Out of the way!
-It's the Kabane!
+It's the Corpses!
-That's the bell.
+Is that... the alarm?
-Don't tell me...!
+Don't tell me...
-The Kabane are here?!
+The Corpses are here!?
 I have to go.
-I need to get my piercing gun!
+I need to get my Piercing Cannon!
-Hurry up!
+Quickly, dear!
 I'm taking these too.
-Mumei, they've broken through the west gate.
+No-name,
+they've broken through the west gate.
 This whole place is lost.
 But—
-We're going to the Kotetsujyo.
+We're going to the Iron Fortress.
 Come.
 Father, where are you going?
-To the Kotetsujyo.
+To the Iron Fortress.
-Wait, you're not...?
+Surely you're not...
-Are you abandoning this station?
+You would abandon this station?
-I will give the signal when the Kotetsujyo has been secured.
+I will give the signal when the \NIron Fortress has been secured.
-Come when you see it.
+When you see it, come.
-The Kabane react to blood.
+The Corpses react to blood.
-Damn it, that hurts.
+Fuck, it hurts like hell!
-Stop! Take off your clothes immediately!
+Hold it! Take off your clothes immediately!
-Are you kidding me?! The Kabane are coming!
+You fuckin' kidding me!? The Corpses are coming!
 Prove that you don't have any marks on your body!
 What's going to happen to us?
-Where's Ikoma?!
+Where's Ikoma?
 He took the bait!
 I won't fail this time!
-I've increased the explosives this time!
+I've increased the explosive load!
 I did it!
-My piercing gun bore right through its heart!
+My Piercing Cannon punched straight through its heart!
-My gun!
+This thing!
-I did this!
+That I made!
 I see it.
-It's the Kotetsujyo.
+It's the Iron Fortress.
-Mumei.
+Lady No-name.
-You will have to continue on alone.
+You must continue on your journey alone.
-Go to Kongokaku and await the Young Master's orders.
+Go to Kongoukaku and await the Young Master's orders.
 I leave the rest in your hands.
-May karma smile upon you.
+May fortune smile upon you in the next life.
 It's not a curse.
 I just need to make sure the virus doesn't reach my brain!
 Five years...
-It's been five years.
+It's been five long years.
-All the work I put in
+Giving blood, sweat and tears...
-to finally be able to fight the Kabane...
+to finally be able to fight the Corpses.
-I'm not the same as I was then.
+I'm...
-I will never...
+no longer the person I was back then.
-I will never run again!
+I will never, ever...
+Ever run again!
 This time...
 I...
-I will become someone I can be proud of.
+I will become a person I can be proud of!

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