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#Crunchyroll

#GJM-DDY

Good morning, Cocona.

Good morning.

What's the matter?

Did you have a bad dream?

Nah.

I'm off.

Hey.

I got a final warning about my tardiness.

They said it was my "final warning" for being late.{I got a final warning about my tardiness.}

What's wrong? Muscle ache?

What's wrong? Muscle pain?

Did I sleep on it wrong?

Maybe I slept on it wrong?

You're...

You again?!

What the heck?

Yoohoo, Cocona!

Papika?!

Who're you?

{OP}

So who're you?

Papika.

Who're you?

I see no need to introduce myself.

Like I'm gonna tell you.

No fair!

You know her?

Nope.

Hey! Cocona!

What's the deal?

I've got school now.

I need to hurry.

Get on, then.

Here we are.

Look, you...

Are those wounds...

Are those injuries...

Are you okay?

They didn't do anything weird to you?

Stop it! I'm fine!

Thank goodness.

The fragment's safe, too.

Is that it?

The thing that will grant wishes?

The wishing thing?

Yep.

Apparently, we've gotta gather a few more of them.

Apparently, we still need more.

Let's go look for them again.

Let's go look for them again sometime!

If you want to go, go by yourself.

If you want to go, count me out.

I can't!

I can't do it by myself!

The tunnel only opens up if we both feel the same way.

The tunnel only opens up if our feelings are in tune.

I'm not powerful enough to go alone.

I'm not strong enough to go alone.

But I finally found a partner, and it's you!

But I finally found a partner!{Koinuri, is this the same word as in line 84 from ep 1?}{yeah, same word}{I think I will change these instances to partner for batch then. Thanks.}

I don't care.

Didn't you have fun adventuring with me?

But wasn't adventuring with me fun?

Let go of me!

You okay?

Let me make this clear.

Outsiders aren't allowed on school premises.

Non-students aren't allowed on school grounds.

They'll throw you out if they find you.

You'll be removed if they find you.

What was that all about?

Long story.

Cocona?

Uexkull came with me!

Uexküll came with me!

Oh, big deal.

Oh, whatever.

It {\i1}is{\i0} a big deal!

It is {\i1}not{\i0} whatever!

What do I do?

Hollo!

Good day{Hollo}!{What is the malformation of the word she's using here?}{"tanomou" is used when samurai challenges a dojo master to prove his skill. Now it's usually used as a random goofy greetings}{Oh, I see. Then I'm going to shoot for the goofy foreigner wording here rather than mispronounced words.}

Papika?!

Cocona!

Cocona, Cocona, Cocona!

Seriously, what's with you?

Seriously, what's your problem?

What was it, again?

What was my line here?

I'm a transfer student!

Oh! I'm a transfer student!

"...it passes the big ship and finally disappears again into the depths,

sputtering on the water as though the burning tongs

had been suddenly"—Quiet.

had been suddenly"—Quiet.{How fluid is this transition, grammatically? Can I make "silenced" work? "'had been suddenly'--silenced"}{It's really forced in Japanese}{Kay. I'll leave it then.}

You're awesome!

Cocona!

Want some rolled omelet?

Want some tamagoyaki?{I hate having to localize stuff like this. What are your thoughts, Koi?}{I think omelet is different enough from tamagoyaki to un-localize if you prefer that, so I'll leave it up to you to decide}{Cool.}{aaaaa}

Hey, why don't you join the basketball team?

Cocona!

Thanks.

Uexkull.

Uexküll.

Uexkull?

Uexküll?

Found you!

Sniff, sniff, sniff, sniff.

Are you gonna eat here?

What are you playing at?

What do you think you're doing?

Where'd "transfer student" come from?

What's with this "transfer student" stuff?

If I'm a transfer student, I can be with you.

If I'm a transfer student, I can be near you.

Salt said so.

Who?

An important person in FlipFlap.

Did he order you to come here?

No.

I found you myself.

So, anyway, let's go adventuring after school—

I've got cram school then.

I've got cram school after.

Wait.

I'm going to the bathroom. Don't follow me.

Me, too.

Wait up!

Leave me alone!

Cocona.

Cocona!

Is she gone?

Seems so.

Thanks.

Wait.

Yayaka?

It's nothing.

You gotta spell it out to people like her, or they'll never get it.

You gotta be direct with people like her, or they won't get it.

Yeah.

You softie.

What do you think?

It's... scary.

But...

But?

Nothing.

Come visit the art club sometime.

I love this painting, too.

Cocona! I've been waiting!

Ow...

Uexkull!

Uexküll!

Cocona!

Don't hold him by the ears.

He's terrified of you!

Sheesh.

Before the teachers see him, I have to—

Uexkull! Uexkull!

Uexküll! Uexküll!

Hey! Hey!

He's not coming out.

I've had it.

That does it.

It's always like this when I'm with you!

This stuff always happens when I'm around you!

Why are you like this?!

You're wild, pushy, and have no sense of danger!

What if you die?!

What if you got killed?!

It'd be too late for regrets!

You can't take that back!{Is this too much flexing the line? The original was "It'd be too late for regrets."}

Re...grets?

Take... back?

Even back then...

Even then...

I thought you'd die.

Go away, and don't come back.

I don't want to go on your stupid adventures.

Cocona...

I heard a cry.

Uxe...kill? What was it, again?

Uexkull.

Uexküll.

Uexkull!

Uexküll!

Uexkull!

Uexküll!

Papika?

Is that you, Papika?

Cocona!

Sniff, sniff, sniff...

Papika?

Is that you, Papika?

That...

That tickles!

Papika.

Your ears...

You've got them, too.

No!

I've got all this fur all over!

What do I do?!

Bite, bite, bite, bite...

Is that really safe to bite?

I don'd know, bud my jaw feelse weally westlezz for zome weazon.{I don't know}

I donno, bud my jaw feews weawy westwess for some weason.{I don't know, but my jaw feels really restless for some reason}

You wadda bidey-bide, doo?

You wanna nibbly-nib, doo?

N-No way.

I'd never do anything so unseemly.

Uexkull?

Uexküll?{that's a hell of a name}{that's a name? wtf}{same}

He ended up here, too?

Where are you going?

To look for Uexkull.

To look for Uexküll.

What? But what about the fragments?

Weren't you listening to what I said earlier?

You stay right where you are.

Or else you'll cause another disaster.

Cocona, wait!

Uexkull!

Uexküll!

Uexkull!

Uexküll!

Oh, honestly...

Oh, c'mon...

That looks hard...

Not again.

What's going on?

No. Absolutely not.

You mustn't go bitey-bite.

You can't nibbly-nib.

Cocona?

What's wrong, Cocona?

You okay?

No! Don't look!

Cocona... Cocona!

No!

Hup...

How much longer, Bu-chan?

Wow.

It's really hard.

Got it!

What's happening?

Cocona!

Cocona! Cocona!

Papika!

Cocona!

Are you...

Uexkull?

Cocona!

But Cocona's...

Papika!

Cocona's...

Cocona!

It's always like this when I'm with you!

This stuff always happens when I'm around you!

Even back then...

Even then...

I thought you'd die.

Cocona!

Papika?

Cocona! Thank goodness!

Papika...

What happened to you?

I kinda feel full of energy now.

I feel kinda buzzy now.

Is this really a matter of energy?

What is this about "buzzy"?{How do I make sense of this line "genki no mondai"? I don't like the "matter of energy" but I'm not sure how to keep it close to the JP.}{This one is really literal so as long as the edited line conveys similar meaning, it should be fine}

Who's that?

This is...

Run for it!

Where?

Is that the way out?

I'm going.

Papika?

Come with me.

I swear I won't let you go.

You'd better not, Papika.

Got it!

It didn't work!

No, it stopped for a second!

I'll do the countdown!

Okay!

Three...

Two...

One...

Go!

Ow...

Uexkull.

I'm glad you're okay.

Cocona...

Now I get why you said you didn't want to go adventuring.

I thought you'd die, too.

I thought you were going to die, too.

Sorry.

But it was fun.

That last bit was awesome.

Will you go back again?

Yeah, I want to.

You don't learn, huh?

Well, I don't mind going with you every now and then.

Okay...

Huh?

Only every now and then. And if I feel like it.

Only every now and then. And only if I feel like it.

Cocona! Cocona!

Jeez, only every now and then, okay? You got that?

Jeez, only every now and then, okay? You got it?

Cocona!

Where are we going?

To FlipFlap.

I need to introduce you to everyone.

I'm back!

Welcome back.

That must be the partner.

That must be your partner.

Nice to meet you. I'm Sayuri.

Nice to meet you.

Let's see...

Wh-What is it?

So you're Cocona.

Dr. Salt.

That's Salt.

Keep a fragment on you.

Take them to the Thomasson.

Got it.

Let's go.

Wait!

We call the world you went to Pure Illusion.

Retrieving the fragments scattered there is your job for the foreseeable future.

Both them are ready to go!

{\i1}Roger.

{\i1}Let's get started, then.

Job?

Uh, working is against school rules—

No problem. There's no pay involved.

Papika?

Cocona.

It's okay.

Papika.

{\i1}Dr. Salt, impedance is approaching zero.

{\i1}Begin.

{\i1}Um...

Um...

Salt-san.

What did you mean about the fragments?

What are these fragments?

{\i1}Why are you collecting them?

To liberate Pure Illusion.

Here we go, Cocona.

What is this?

#ED

Next time on {\i1}Flip Flappers{\i0}:

"Pure—

Hey, Hidaka-san!

What?

Isn't last month's electricity bill way too high?

Wasn't last month's electricity bill way too high?

Uh, well...

How many times must you upgrade the equipment?!

Do you have to make upgrades that often?!

Retreat!

He ran away?!

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#Crunchyroll
Good morning, Cocona.
Good morning.
What's the matter?
Did you have a bad dream?
Nah.
I'm off.
Hey.
I got a final warning about my tardiness.
What's wrong? Muscle ache?
Did I sleep on it wrong?
You're...
What the heck?
Yoohoo, Cocona!
Papika?!
Who're you?
Papika.
Who're you?
I see no need to introduce myself.
No fair!
You know her?
Nope.
Hey! Cocona!
What's the deal?
I've got school now.
I need to hurry.
Get on, then.
Here we are.
Look, you...
Are those wounds...
Are you okay?
They didn't do anything weird to you?
Stop it! I'm fine!
Thank goodness.
The fragment's safe, too.
Is that it?
The thing that will grant wishes?
Yep.
Apparently, we've gotta gather a few more of them.
Let's go look for them again.
If you want to go, go by yourself.
I can't!
The tunnel only opens up if we both feel the same way.
I'm not powerful enough to go alone.
But I finally found a partner, and it's you!
I don't care.
Didn't you have fun adventuring with me?
Let go of me!
You okay?
Let me make this clear.
Outsiders aren't allowed on school premises.
They'll throw you out if they find you.
What was that all about?
Long story.
Cocona?
Uexkull came with me!
Oh, big deal.
It {\i1}is{\i0} a big deal!
What do I do?
Hollo!
Papika?!
Cocona!
Cocona, Cocona, Cocona!
Seriously, what's with you?
What was it, again?
I'm a transfer student!
"...it passes the big ship and finally disappears again into the depths,
sputtering on the water as though the burning tongs
had been suddenly"—Quiet.
You're awesome!
Cocona!
Want some rolled omelet?
Hey, why don't you join the basketball team?
Cocona!
Thanks.
Uexkull.
Uexkull?
Found you!
Sniff, sniff, sniff, sniff.
Are you gonna eat here?
What are you playing at?
Where'd "transfer student" come from?
If I'm a transfer student, I can be with you.
Salt said so.
Who?
An important person in FlipFlap.
Did he order you to come here?
No.
I found you myself.
So, anyway, let's go adventuring after school—
I've got cram school then.
Wait.
I'm going to the bathroom. Don't follow me.
Me, too.
Wait up!
Leave me alone!
Cocona.
Cocona!
Is she gone?
Seems so.
Thanks.
Wait.
Yayaka?
It's nothing.
You gotta spell it out to people like her, or they'll never get it.
Yeah.
You softie.
What do you think?
It's... scary.
But...
But?
Nothing.
Come visit the art club sometime.
I love this painting, too.
Cocona! I've been waiting!
Ow...
Uexkull!
Cocona!
Don't hold him by the ears.
He's terrified of you!
Sheesh.
Before the teachers see him, I have to—
Uexkull! Uexkull!
Hey! Hey!
He's not coming out.
I've had it.
It's always like this when I'm with you!
Why are you like this?!
You're wild, pushy, and have no sense of danger!
What if you die?!
It'd be too late for regrets!
Re...grets?
Even back then...
I thought you'd die.
Go away, and don't come back.
I don't want to go on your stupid adventures.
Cocona...
I heard a cry.
Uxe...kill? What was it, again?
Uexkull.
Uexkull!
Uexkull!
Papika?
Is that you, Papika?
Cocona!
Sniff, sniff, sniff...
Papika?
Is that you, Papika?
That...
That tickles!
Papika.
Your ears...
You've got them, too.
No!
I've got all this fur all over!
What do I do?!
Bite, bite, bite, bite...
Is that really safe to bite?
I don'd know, bud my jaw feelse weally westlezz for zome weazon.{I don't know}
You wadda bidey-bide, doo?
N-No way.
I'd never do anything so unseemly.
Uexkull?
He ended up here, too?
Where are you going?
To look for Uexkull.
What? But what about the fragments?
Weren't you listening to what I said earlier?
You stay right where you are.
Or else you'll cause another disaster.
Cocona, wait!
Uexkull!
Uexkull!
Oh, honestly...
That looks hard...
Not again.
What's going on?
No. Absolutely not.
You mustn't go bitey-bite.
Cocona?
What's wrong, Cocona?
You okay?
No! Don't look!
Cocona... Cocona!
No!
Hup...
How much longer, Bu-chan?
Wow.
It's really hard.
Got it!
What's happening?
Cocona!
Cocona! Cocona!
Papika!
Cocona!
Are you...
Uexkull?
Cocona!
Cocona!
Cocona!
But Cocona's...
Papika!
Cocona's...
Cocona!
It's always like this when I'm with you!
Even back then...
I thought you'd die.
Cocona!
Papika?
Cocona! Thank goodness!
Papika...
What happened to you?
I kinda feel full of energy now.
Is this really a matter of energy?
Who's that?
This is...
Run for it!
Where?
Is that the way out?
I'm going.
Papika?
Come with me.
I swear I won't let you go.
You'd better not, Papika.
Got it!
It didn't work!
No, it stopped for a second!
I'll do the countdown!
Okay!
Three...
Two...
One...
Go!
Ow...
Uexkull.
I'm glad you're okay.
Cocona...
Now I get why you said you didn't want to go adventuring.
I thought you'd die, too.
Sorry.
But it was fun.
That last bit was awesome.
Will you go back again?
Yeah, I want to.
You don't learn, huh?
Well, I don't mind going with you every now and then.
Okay...
Huh?
Only every now and then. And if I feel like it.
Cocona! Cocona!
Jeez, only every now and then, okay? You got that?
Cocona!
Where are we going?
To FlipFlap.
I need to introduce you to everyone.
I'm back!
Welcome back.
That must be the partner.
Nice to meet you. I'm Sayuri.
Nice to meet you.
Let's see...
Wh-What is it?
So you're Cocona.
Dr. Salt.
That's Salt.
Keep a fragment on you.
Take them to the Thomasson.
Got it.
Let's go.
Wait!
We call the world you went to Pure Illusion.
Retrieving the fragments scattered there is your job for the foreseeable future.
Both them are ready to go!
{\i1}Roger.
{\i1}Let's get started, then.
Job?
Uh, working is against school rules—
No problem. There's no pay involved.
Papika?
Cocona.
It's okay.
Papika.
{\i1}Dr. Salt, impedance is approaching zero.
{\i1}Begin.
{\i1}Um...
Salt-san.
What did you mean about the fragments?
{\i1}Why are you collecting them?
To liberate Pure Illusion.
Here we go, Cocona.
What is this?
Next time on {\i1}Flip Flappers{\i0}:
"Pure—
Hey, Hidaka-san!
What?
Isn't last month's electricity bill way too high?
Uh, well...
How many times must you upgrade the equipment?!
Retreat!
He ran away?!

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#GJM-DDY
Good morning, Cocona.
Good morning.
What's the matter?
Did you have a bad dream?
Nah.
I'm off.
Hey.
They said it was my "final warning" for being late.{I got a final warning about my tardiness.}
What's wrong? Muscle pain?
Maybe I slept on it wrong?
You again?!
What the heck?
Yoohoo, Cocona!
Papika?!
{OP}
So who're you?
Papika.
Who're you?
Like I'm gonna tell you.
No fair!
You know her?
Nope.
Hey! Cocona!
What's the deal?
I've got school now.
I need to hurry.
Get on, then.
Here we are.
Look, you...
Are those injuries...
Are you okay?
They didn't do anything weird to you?
Stop it! I'm fine!
Thank goodness.
The fragment's safe, too.
Is that it?
The wishing thing?
Yep.
Apparently, we still need more.
Let's go look for them again sometime!
If you want to go, count me out.
I can't do it by myself!
The tunnel only opens up if our feelings are in tune.
I'm not strong enough to go alone.
But I finally found a partner!{Koinuri, is this the same word as in line 84 from ep 1?}{yeah, same word}{I think I will change these instances to partner for batch then. Thanks.}
I don't care.
But wasn't adventuring with me fun?
Let go of me!
You okay?
Let me make this clear.
Non-students aren't allowed on school grounds.
You'll be removed if they find you.
What was that all about?
Long story.
Cocona?
Uexküll came with me!
Oh, whatever.
It is {\i1}not{\i0} whatever!
What do I do?
Good day{Hollo}!{What is the malformation of the word she's using here?}{"tanomou" is used when samurai challenges a dojo master to prove his skill.  Now it's usually used as a random goofy greetings}{Oh, I see. Then I'm going to shoot for the goofy foreigner wording here rather than mispronounced words.}
Papika?!
Cocona!
Cocona, Cocona, Cocona!
Seriously, what's your problem?
What was my line here?
Oh! I'm a transfer student!
"...it passes the big ship and finally disappears again into the depths,
sputtering on the water as though the burning tongs
had been suddenly"—Quiet.{How fluid is this transition, grammatically? Can I make "silenced" work? "'had been suddenly'--silenced"}{It's really forced in Japanese}{Kay. I'll leave it then.}
You're awesome!
Cocona!
Want some tamagoyaki?{I hate having to localize stuff like this. What are your thoughts, Koi?}{I think omelet is different enough from tamagoyaki to un-localize if you prefer that, so I'll leave it up to you to decide}{Cool.}{aaaaa}
Hey, why don't you join the basketball team?
Cocona!
Thanks.
Uexküll.
Uexküll?
Found you!
Sniff, sniff, sniff, sniff.
Are you gonna eat here?
What do you think you're doing?
What's with this "transfer student" stuff?
If I'm a transfer student, I can be near you.
Salt said so.
Who?
An important person in FlipFlap.
Did he order you to come here?
No.
I found you myself.
So, anyway, let's go adventuring after school—
I've got cram school after.
Wait.
I'm going to the bathroom. Don't follow me.
Me, too.
Wait up!
Leave me alone!
Cocona.
Cocona!
Is she gone?
Seems so.
Thanks.
Wait.
Yayaka?
It's nothing.
You gotta be direct with people like her, or they won't get it.
Yeah.
You softie.
What do you think?
It's... scary.
But...
But?
Nothing.
Come visit the art club sometime.
I love this painting, too.
Cocona! I've been waiting!
Ow...
Uexküll!
Cocona!
Don't hold him by the ears.
He's terrified of you!
Sheesh.
Before the teachers see him, I have to—
Uexküll! Uexküll!
Hey! Hey!
He's not coming out.
That does it.
This stuff always happens when I'm around you!
Why are you like this?!
You're wild, pushy, and have no sense of danger!
What if you got killed?!
You can't take that back!{Is this too much flexing the line? The original was "It'd be too late for regrets."}
Take... back?
Even then...
I thought you'd die.
Go away, and don't come back.
I don't want to go on your stupid adventures.
Cocona...
I heard a cry.
Uxe...kill? What was it, again?
Uexküll.
Uexküll!
Uexküll!
Papika?
Is that you, Papika?
Cocona!
Sniff, sniff, sniff...
Papika?
Is that you, Papika?
That...
That tickles!
Papika.
Your ears...
You've got them, too.
No!
I've got all this fur all over!
What do I do?!
Bite, bite, bite, bite...
Is that really safe to bite?
I donno, bud my jaw feews weawy westwess for some weason.{I don't know, but my jaw feels really restless for some reason}
You wanna nibbly-nib, doo?
N-No way.
I'd never do anything so unseemly.
Uexküll?{that's a hell of a name}{that's a name? wtf}{same}
He ended up here, too?
Where are you going?
To look for Uexküll.
What? But what about the fragments?
Weren't you listening to what I said earlier?
You stay right where you are.
Or else you'll cause another disaster.
Cocona, wait!
Uexküll!
Uexküll!
Oh, c'mon...
That looks hard...
Not again.
What's going on?
No. Absolutely not.
You can't nibbly-nib.
Cocona?
What's wrong, Cocona?
You okay?
No! Don't look!
Cocona... Cocona!
No!
Hup...
How much longer, Bu-chan?
Wow.
It's really hard.
Got it!
What's happening?
Cocona!
Cocona! Cocona!
Papika!
Cocona!
Are you...
Uexkull?
Cocona!
Cocona!
Cocona!
But Cocona's...
Papika!
Cocona's...
Cocona!
This stuff always happens when I'm around you!
Even then...
I thought you'd die.
Cocona!
Papika?
Cocona! Thank goodness!
Papika...
What happened to you?
I feel kinda buzzy now.
What is this about "buzzy"?{How do I make sense of this line "genki no mondai"? I don't like the "matter of energy" but I'm not sure how to keep it close to the JP.}{This one is really literal so as long as the edited line conveys similar meaning, it should be fine}
Who's that?
This is...
Run for it!
Where?
Is that the way out?
I'm going.
Papika?
Come with me.
I swear I won't let you go.
You'd better not, Papika.
Got it!
It didn't work!
No, it stopped for a second!
I'll do the countdown!
Okay!
Three...
Two...
One...
Go!
Ow...
Uexkull.
I'm glad you're okay.
Cocona...
Now I get why you said you didn't want to go adventuring.
I thought you were going to die, too.
Sorry.
But it was fun.
That last bit was awesome.
Will you go back again?
Yeah, I want to.
You don't learn, huh?
Well, I don't mind going with you every now and then.
Okay...
Huh?
Only every now and then. And only if I feel like it.
Cocona! Cocona!
Jeez, only every now and then, okay? You got it?
Cocona!
Where are we going?
To FlipFlap.
I need to introduce you to everyone.
I'm back!
Welcome back.
That must be your partner.
Nice to meet you. I'm Sayuri.
Nice to meet you.
Let's see...
Wh-What is it?
So you're Cocona.
Dr. Salt.
That's Salt.
Keep a fragment on you.
Take them to the Thomasson.
Got it.
Let's go.
Wait!
We call the world you went to Pure Illusion.
Retrieving the fragments scattered there is your job for the foreseeable future.
Both them are ready to go!
{\i1}Roger.
{\i1}Let's get started, then.
Job?
Uh, working is against school rules—
No problem. There's no pay involved.
Papika?
Cocona.
It's okay.
Papika.
{\i1}Dr. Salt, impedance is approaching zero.
{\i1}Begin.
Um...
Salt-san.
What are these fragments?
{\i1}Why are you collecting them?
To liberate Pure Illusion.
Here we go, Cocona.
What is this?
#ED
Next time on {\i1}Flip Flappers{\i0}:
"Pure—
Hey, Hidaka-san!
What?
Wasn't last month's electricity bill way too high?
Uh, well...
Do you have to make upgrades that often?!
Retreat!
He ran away?!